Feedback for "tyrant" Rough Edit 1

 Feedback - tyrant rough edit 1 

Positive:

- good sound 

- good score

- effective filter

- ironic flavour

- after effects 

- font and colour 

- music 

- editing 

- slow zoom

Improvements for next time:

- more sound effects 

- too dark at the start + have relative contrasting lighting

- add wailing sounds for depth (electric guitar)

- maybe elevator music enter in the elevator

-  add emphasis on eshloe and jack with sound effects

- fade in new score