Foundation Portfolio rough edit

Feedback:

sound needs attention (make sound levels right with music up and ambient sound down a bit)
more sound layers to really intensify things as flashbacks begin to happen
sound effect when can gets slammed down could really help bring intensity
slow motion to give those sinister shots more time?
credits could be over black screen and could insert some thriller conventions by use of blood dripping or red font that nods to the thriller/ danger vibe
static doesn’t really work
sound needs to be much more sinister as your ‘victim’ walks downstairs, music is still too neutral
sound FX moments for intense ‘boom’ or impact moment when door closes / when door opens with hooded guy – that sound effect can be much more suspenseful
play around with sound at the end and maybe an effect on it as the girl is dragged away
credits needed

The flashes are extremely effective- builds the suspense really well when they are paired in time with the music
storyline was clear and easy to follow- while still holding mystery behind who the killer is
The title was really well done
The music choice was really effective although some of the sound levels could use some alterations- make it a bit more smooth.
your music at the beginning is quite loud compared to the background chatter and noise- maybe adjust it a little bit.
The reveal of the cards is really well done- with the beat of the music..
looking greattt- cant wait to see the end result!!

AS Media Studies